{"id":2553,"date":"2015-01-15T08:00:18","date_gmt":"2015-01-15T15:00:18","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/?p=2553"},"modified":"2016-01-17T20:37:42","modified_gmt":"2016-01-18T03:37:42","slug":"avoid-cliched-characters-and-more-from-guest-blogger-daryl-hajek","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/avoid-cliched-characters-and-more-from-guest-blogger-daryl-hajek\/","title":{"rendered":"Avoid clich\u00e9d characters. . . and more, from Guest Blogger Daryl Hajek"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Guest blogger Daryl Hajek discusses a writer&#8217;s journey.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">I was taught to learn to read and write at a young age, even before kindergarten. My parents\u00a0had told me, because of my deafness, they were determined that I was going to learn to read\u00a0and write. That was the beginning of my journey into reading and writing.<\/p>\n<p>As Stephen King says, &#8220;Read a lot, write a lot.&#8221; \u00a0I do this by reading two or three books (or ebooks) concurrently, but that&#8217;s a quirk of mine.\u00a0\u00a0I also write at least one hour a day, up to eight hours, depending on my mood or how I&#8217;m feeling.<\/p>\n<p>Learn as much as you can about writing.\u00a0 Take a writing course or two.\u00a0 Get how-to books on writing.\u00a0 Join a book club.\u00a0 Network with other authors\/writers online via social media.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Get a professional editor which is an absolute must, no exceptions whatsoever.\u00a0 Otherwise, unedited works show and may cause long-term regrets and embarrassments.\u00a0 It&#8217;s most important to learn from your editor, as well.\u00a0 I gained a healthy bit of edification from my editor\u00a0such as\u00a0eliminating redundancies and not repeating the same descriptive adjectives or adverbs in your narration, especially within the same sentence or paragraph.<\/p>\n<p>Keep expositions to a minimum so as not to drag the story down and bore the reader.<\/p>\n<p>Omit\u00a0 the following\u00a0dead\/boring\/over-used\u00a0words:\u00a0 was, actually, literally, quite, virtually, got, things, stuff, just, really, very,\u00a0a lot, and action verbs ending in &#8220;-ing,&#8221; such as &#8220;running,&#8221; &#8220;skating,&#8221; &#8220;dancing,&#8221; and so on.\u00a0 Instead, use action words like &#8220;he ran,&#8221; &#8220;she skated,&#8221; &#8220;they danced,&#8221; and so forth.\u00a0 The reason is that these words weaken the author&#8217;s writing (in the narration), but it&#8217;s okay to use them in character dialogue because that&#8217;s how people talk.\u00a0 Equally, leave out clich\u00e9s, idioms, and slang from the narration except for character dialogue.<\/p>\n<p>Another thing to cut from writing are speech tags, such as &#8220;Gary muttered quietly,&#8221; &#8220;Melissa said bitterly,&#8221; and &#8220;Carl barked angrily.&#8221;\u00a0 They also make for weak writing.\u00a0\u00a0Stick with the traditional &#8220;he said\/she said&#8221; way of writing.\u00a0 In fact, &#8220;he said\/she said&#8221; is practically invisible to the reader&#8217;s eye.\u00a0 If\u00a0the author needs to use speech tags, I&#8217;d recommend using them sparingly.<\/p>\n<p>Avoid\u00a0clich\u00e9d characters, such as the typical black-cloaked villain with\u00a0those smoldering eyes or the golden-haired Miss Goody-Two-Shoes.\u00a0 Rather,\u00a0make your characters realistic, like the average person, such as the guy next to you.\u00a0 But, don&#8217;t make those characters boring.\u00a0 Give each character a little something intriguing,\u00a0add a certain idiosyncrasy (i.e., a nervous\u00a0tic)\u00a0or a\u00a0condition\u00a0(i.e.,\u00a0deafness or Asperger&#8217;s\u00a0Syndrome).<\/p>\n<p>As a first-time deaf author of general mainstream mass-market fiction, if\u00a0<em>I <\/em>can do it, so can you!<\/p>\n<p>Daryl Hajek is the author of <em>Blood Blossom<\/em>.\u00a0 He is currently at work on his next novel.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Guest blogger Daryl Hajek discusses a writer&#8217;s journey. 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