{"id":5363,"date":"2016-04-22T19:13:28","date_gmt":"2016-04-23T02:13:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/?p=5363"},"modified":"2016-04-22T19:13:28","modified_gmt":"2016-04-23T02:13:28","slug":"new-ways-of-looking-at-old-prompt-247","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/new-ways-of-looking-at-old-prompt-247\/","title":{"rendered":"New ways of looking at old-   Prompt #247"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>If you have been writing for awhile, you might notice that you keep writing about the same things over and over again: how Aunt Luella always sticks her nose in everybody&#8217;s business; how Uncle Ray tells those awful jokes and doesn&#8217;t seem to notice that no one laughs; how Nonna&#8217;s getting on everybody&#8217;s nerves, should Aunt Silvie be put in assisted living and what the heck is up with Joey&#8217;s latest tattoo?<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/Mr.-Ed-The-Talking-Horse.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-5365 alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/Mr.-Ed-The-Talking-Horse.png\" alt=\"Mr. Ed The Talking Horse\" width=\"333\" height=\"226\" align=\"left\" srcset=\"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/Mr.-Ed-The-Talking-Horse.png 333w, https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/Mr.-Ed-The-Talking-Horse-300x204.png 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 333px) 100vw, 333px\" \/><\/a>We all have our stable of characters that we dwell about incessantly. Here&#8217;s an opportunity to look at old things in new ways. Inspired by the poem, <a href=\"https:\/\/connectere.wordpress.com\/2016\/03\/31\/the-visible-and-the-in-by-marge-piercy\/\" target=\"_blank\"><em>The visible and the in-<\/em>\u00a0<\/a>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 by <a href=\"http:\/\/writersalmanac.org\/poem_author\/marge-piercy\/?utm_campaign=TWA%20Newsletter%20for%20March%2031%2c%202016&amp;utm_medium=email&amp;utm_source=Eloqua&amp;utm_content=The%20Writer%27s%20Almanac%20for%20March%2031%2c%202016&amp;elqTrackId=4877493f8a314503806efbb63c6fee96&amp;elq=4a74b2fac1144602a4c4198a9080200e&amp;elqaid=21331&amp;elqat=1&amp;elqCampaignId=18479\" target=\"_blank\">Marge Piercy<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Read the stanza below (or the partial stanza), then quickly make a list of everybody this reminds you of. No prolonged thinking. You can always add names later.<\/p>\n<p>Ready? Go!<\/p>\n<p><strong>First stanza of <em>The visible and the in-<\/em>:<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Some people move through your life<br \/>\nlike the perfume of peonies, heavy<br \/>\nand sensual and lingering.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Some people move through your life<br \/>\nlike the sweet musky scent of cosmos<br \/>\nso delicate if you sniff twice, it\u2019s gone.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Some people occupy your life<br \/>\nlike moving men who cart off<br \/>\ncouches, pianos and break dishes.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Some people touch you so lightly you<br \/>\nare not sure it happened.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Others leave<br \/>\nyou flat with footprints on your chest.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Some are like those fall warblers<br \/>\nyou can\u2019t tell from each other even<br \/>\nthough you search Petersen\u2019s.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Some come down hard on you like<br \/>\na striking falcon and the scars remain<br \/>\nand you are forever wary of the sky.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>We all are waiting rooms at bus<br \/>\nstations where hundreds have passed<br \/>\nthrough unnoticed and others<\/p>\n<p>have almost burned us down<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><br \/>\nand others have left us clean and new<br \/>\nand others have just moved in.<\/p>\n<p><strong>This reminds me of: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s it. You can leave this as-is. Or the next time you write about Sophie and how she stole your lipstick in seventh grade. . . use some of these descriptions to expand upon her character, to draw out this experience with specific detail.<\/p>\n<p>Of course this will work for fictional characters, also.<\/p>\n<p>Have fun with this. 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