{"id":8077,"date":"2019-03-11T15:58:50","date_gmt":"2019-03-11T22:58:50","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/?p=8077"},"modified":"2019-03-11T15:58:56","modified_gmt":"2019-03-11T22:58:56","slug":"one-slice-of-the-point-of-view-pie","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/one-slice-of-the-point-of-view-pie\/","title":{"rendered":"One slice of the point of view pie"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>There are many articles and books about point of view. The following is an excerpt from a talk given by author Jim Dodge. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Narrator \u2013 Who tells the story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The most used pov: First person and third person.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>There are three types\nof first person point of view.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>First person direct.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>First person indirect.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>First person objective.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>First person direct<\/strong>:\nProtagonist carries conflict and is usually involved. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Direct \u2013 \u201cit happened to me.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>When narrator carries conflict = direct perception.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>This is the most difficult point of view to work with \u2013 has to\nbe compelling voice to hold readers\u2019 interest.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you can pull it off, it\u2019s powerful.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Stories move in time and space.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Problems with first person point of view: person has to be \u201ceverywhere\u201d\nto get information.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>First person\nindirect:<\/strong> Reflective, or indirect: narrator does not carry conflict.\nNarrator is a character and in a relationship with the protagonist. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Problem with this pov is that you can\u2019t report what happened\nunless narrator was there.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Examples: Herman Melville\u2019s <em>Moby Dick<\/em> \u2013 you would have to be in the boat to tell the story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>One Flew Over the\nCuckoo\u2019s Nest<\/em> \u2013 you would have to be in the insane asylum<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Arthur Conan Doyle\u2019s Sherlock Holmes series uses the buddy\npov narration for these detective stories.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Setting plays in it. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In this pov, the narrator and protagonist are joined at the\nhip, a close friendship.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The point view is not from the main character.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The idea is that \u201csomeone else could tell the story.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>For example, Watson tells Sherlock Holmes\u2019 story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Split point of view \u2013 Two or more narrators. They can tell\nthe story from their point of view in a strict rotation, in a sequence, or\nrandomly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>First person\nobjective:<\/strong> The third type of first person pov is detached and tells the\nstory like a transcript of the events that happened. The narrator never\ndiscloses anything about what the characters think or feel, remaining a\ndetached observer. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>The Laughing Man<\/em>\nby J.D. Salinger tells the story from an unnamed narrator.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Second person point\nof view:<\/strong> You.&nbsp; Rarely used, common in\npoetry.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Third person pov:\nHe\/she\/it\/they<\/strong>. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>It\u2019s easy to move in space and time to tell the story when\nusing third person. This is the most flexible point of view.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Omniscient narrator:<\/strong>\nHas attributes of God. Omnipotent: all powerful, present everywhere. Knows anything\nand everything about characters.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Omniscient narrator has full access to any character at any\ntime (past, present, future).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Omniscient narrator can comment on what characters are doing\nand on their patterns of behavior, movement, thoughts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"alignleft is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Kodak-Camera-691x1024.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-8078\" width=\"93\" height=\"137\" srcset=\"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Kodak-Camera-691x1024.jpg 691w, https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Kodak-Camera-202x300.jpg 202w, https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Kodak-Camera-768x1138.jpg 768w, https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Kodak-Camera.jpg 1328w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 93px) 100vw, 93px\" \/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Your turn:<\/strong> Decide on a subject and write from an objective point of view. Describe the scene as a camera would record it. Write what the camera lens sees and hears (if it&#8217;s a video camera, or a phone recording). Describe the scene like a screenplay. You can\u2019t write what the characters are thinking (the camera can\u2019t see or hear this).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>You can show the characters\u2019 emotions with body language and physical gestures (what can be seen) and with dialogue (what can be heard).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Need a topic to write about? Choose one of the prompts on <a href=\"https:\/\/thewritespot.us\/marlenecullenblog\/?cat=4\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" aria-label=\"The Write Spot Blog. (opens in a new tab)\">The Write Spot Blog.<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>There are many articles and books about point of view. The following is an excerpt from a talk given by author Jim Dodge. Narrator \u2013 Who tells the story. The most used pov: First person and third person. 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