Brevity’s Blog, “Worth the Climb: Self-Editing Secrets That Actually Work” by Allison K. Williams reveals creative ideas for revision as well as first draft ideas. I particularly like Allison’s suggestion about “converting similes to metaphors when possible—saying something is something else is more powerful than saying it’s like something else.” Complementing Allison’s recommendations is advice given to Anita Gail Jones, author of The Peach Seed about her use of “the.” Anita found where she overused “the,” there were other problems. Her evaluation of “the” led to stronger writing and improved her story telling. This advice reinforces Allison’s concept of focusing on one thing at a time when revising. Another gem from Anita, “Beats: A unit of emotional measurement between people.” Harder to find than the single word “the,” but so important in creating a compelling narrative. Thank you to Susan and Patricia for helping me to remember what Anita said at her keynote address at Sebastopol’s Lit Crawl, May 2025.
Tag: Allison K. Williams
Know When to Quit
I’m a fan of Brevity Blog. Here’s a favorite: “Quitting Time: Why You Need to Let Go of That Writing Project” by Allison K. Williams. “As writers, we’re sold on the value of perseverance. Just do another draft. Just keep working. Send another query, another submission. One day you’ll break through. Sit down and finish. Now. Today. This week. In fifteen-minute increments while waiting for carpool, or in one wild coffee-fueled weekend. I think I can, I think I can. I can get to the end of this sentence. This paragraph. This page. This essay. This book. But there’s value in quitting, too. Click “Quitting Time” to read the rest of Allison’s Blog Post.