Write about your first car, or your friend’s first car.
Make, Model, Year.
Bench Seat?
Stick shift?
What was special about this car?
Did you cruise Main Street? Or El Camino Real? Or The Boulevard?
Did you drag race . . . on The Great Highway or a lonesome stretch of road?
Not your family drive-in movies . . . did you go on dates to the drive-in?
Write about a car and car activities, especially the ones that took place during your teen years.
Write about a love affair.
It can be about a person, an animal.
Or a love affair with movies, food, books.
Or shoes, music, art, a mode of transportation, a city, a country.
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“We cannot always direct the wind, but we can adjust our sails.”
It isn’t known who originally said this.
No matter, it’s today’s prompt.
Prompt: How have you adjusted your sails?
From the founder, Gretna Wilkinson, Ph.D.:
The RavensPerch is an online international literary and visual arts magazine. We welcome established as well as emerging writers, tomorrow’s stars. TRP is unique in that the platform brings the literary world together across generations: a home for adults, young adults and children. We publish poetry, fiction, non-fiction and visual art. We are interested in writing that makes us react — all the way from calmly to boisterously. We even give you permission to break our hearts and make us ask for more.
Thank you, Dave Seter, for letting me know about The RavensPerch. Dave has four poems in the February 9, 2023 issue.
What would you like to learn?
You can start by using one or more of these sentence starts:
I want to learn . . .
I want to learn how to . . .
I am learning . . .
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Why I Love Writing Ekphrastic Poetry by Guest Blogger, Robin Gabbert
Yes, I do love writing ekphrastic poetry! It’s poetry that never requires a prompt besides the piece of art you are viewing — be it a painting, a sculpture, a collage, digital rendering, or other artistic presentation such as dance, drama, and music (so hearing counts). You don’t have to search for writing prompts beyond your nearest museum or gallery (or their website) or a visit to WikiArt or Google Arts & Culture to search for your favorite artist or browse for something new that sparks your imagination.
Ekphrastic poetry has been with us since at least the time of Homer and has been used by many of our best poets. An early example is John Keats “Ode on a Grecian Urn.”
Rainer Maria Rilke was another advocate as shown in his beautifully descriptive poem “Archaic Torso of Apollo.”
Modern poets like W.H. Auden, William Carlos Williams, Anne Sexton, and Anne Carson have also written ekphrastic poetry to art as diverse as Bruegel’s “The Fall of Icarus” to “Van Gogh’s Starry Night” and Edward Hopper’s “Nighthawks.”
My contribution to this genre is “The Clandestine Life of Paintings in Poems.”
Do you know that paintings can tell stories? Perhaps you do. But do you also know that they can tell secrets as well – whispering unexpected confidences and tales to their friends, especially poets?
That is how I approach ekphrastic poetry. What does this painting want to tell me? In what way can I best “enter” the art? It might be, what did the artist want to tell me?— but not necessarily.
It might instead be, “What is that dog curled at his master’s feet thinking?” or “What is really on the mind of that nude woman stretched across the divan?”
What feeling does the painting evoke in the viewer, in me? Does it relate to some issue I care about? Is there an ambiguity in the art that can be explored?
Abstracts and surreal paintings can be fun to write about because, rather than a story, they tend to bring up feelings, emotions and then challenge you to evoke in your poem both the painting, and what you discern from it, in a way that is relatable to the reader.
Here are a few examples of ekphrastic poems, starting with the very simple, including explanations of how I approached them, how I “entered” the art.
I Know How You Feel
Little brown leaf caught
by the sun, in mid-flutter.
I too, sometimes
just want to curl-in on myself
and hope for a soft landing.
This simple sweet image evoked a feeling in me, which I translated into a short, simple poem. The poem gave feelings to a small leaf so that I could express my own feelings, by empathizing with it.
This next poem, “Yelo Moon,“ is different. The title character in this striking watercolor is so large and so vivid, it demands attention. It demanded that I make him (funny how it had to be a “him”) the Center of Attention. So, I did.
Yelo Moon
After a watercolor of the same name
by Marion Stern
The glowing saffron globe
pulls itself into the night sky
and seems to float
in the wetland marsh,
reflecting, observing
its gleaming face in the salty water.
As if to say—
See,
I am not made of green cheese!
Behold me with wonder—
I light the sky, I light the land.
Marsh grasses, cower before me!
I pull the tides like stretching rubber bands,
leaving crabs to flounder and unwary boats askew.
But the sea grasses and marsh creatures know
that, as the braggart rises, his reflection will
shrink along with
his delusions of grandeur.
After the bragging moon had his say, of course, he had to be brought back down to earth. Thus, the last stanza is written from the point of view of the surrounding plants and animals that are listening to the moon go on and on about how great he is, letting us know that they are not buying into his PR spiel.
Another technique I use in writing ekphrastic poetry is to invent a fictional story based on a person in a painting. In “Clandestine Life of Paintings in Poems, it was a portrait of a woman by Amedeo Modigliani— an artist who does amazing portraits, portraits you could stare at all day because the people in them are so fascinating, mesmerizing. The name of the painting was simply “Amaisa.” In my poem, she became “The Woman with the Wrist Tattoo.”
The Woman with the Wrist Tattoo
Based on Amaisa by Amedeo Modigliani
The woman across the room
seems upset, trying not to look
at anyone, she focuses on the door.
Eyes, two shining coals
rimmed with sorrow
She lights a cigarette,
but lets the fire burn down
until the ash is almost at her hand.
Her lipstick slightly smeared
on pillowed lips.
Swallowing, she pulls herself upright,
assumes an iron face
and greets the man who’s just entered—
Hello Claude,
She puts out the cigarette.
Don’t look so surprised,
(this is Claude’s favorite club
not a place she is expected).
do you think I don’t know
that you’re not here
when you tell me you’re
going for a cigar and brandy
with Maurice?
Do you think I don’t smell
the stink of attar and ashes
from your dalliance with the
vicinal char girl?
Well, I’ve had enough.
I used your long absence
to get this reminder of you—
she says extending her arm—
the snake who slithered up my sleeve
and into my heart, the serpent who
stole my fortune and dignity
When people ask about
the tattoo at my wrist,
I’ll just tell them—
Oh, that’s Claude, a snake
I once knew
But really, it’s just a reminder that,
if you again try to take my hand,
I should pull it back…
To avoid the sting.
These are just a few of the ways one can “enter” a piece of art to write a poem. Other ways include exploring the spiritual aspects the painting may suggest, or the purely emotional aspects. Of course, paintings and other art can suggest all manner of issues to write about including social issues, relationship issues, and all the diverse items that your brain can connect to an image! Don’t go in with a preconceived notion, just look at the art and give your mind free reign. You may be surprised what the painting has to tell you.
Robin Gabbert has poems in Redwood Writer Poetry anthologies, California Writers Club Literary Reviews and in “The Best Haiku” 2022 international anthology from Haiku Crush.
Robin’s books, “Diary of a Mad Poet” and “The Clandestine Life of Paintings, in Poems”are available on Amazon.
Several of her haiku, tankas, and haibuns appear in the anthology, “Burro in My Kitchen,”published byBlue Light Press.
Robin lives in California wine country with her Dutch husband, Con Jager, and pup Hamish.
available on Amazon.
“A dear friend gave me a small notebook, with a sun on the cover. I often find myself writing in it while drinking my morning coffee, mostly just short phrases or impressions. It reminds of the simple listening that allows sparkling dew drop images to appear.” — Pam Hiller
You can read more of Pam’s writing: Journey on The Write Spot Blog and in The Write Spot to Jumpstart Your Writing: Discoveries.
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Memorable writing that sparks imagination. Lean in. Hear the writer’s voice on the page.
Rain Dog, a Pantoum
By Suse Pareto
Dog is bored and restless.
Rain is pouring down.
I’m loath to leave this comfy bed,
but walk we must, says she.
Rain is pouring down,
the road is sodden and feckless.
But walk we must, says she,
up to the woods we go.
The road is sodden and feckless.
The hills are wet and slick.
Up to the woods we go,
Dog barks in great delight.
The hills are wet and slick,
rain drips from leaf and stick.
Dog barks in great delight,
“Water slithering, sliding everywhere!”
Rain drips from leaf and stick.
The gullies run fast and wild,
water slithering, sliding everywhere,
it’s like the earth has burst.
The gullies run fast and wild,
Dog nips at water’s tumble.
It’s like the earth has burst,
she frolics and romps quite madly.
Dog nips at water’s tumble,
gamboling down the hill.
She frolics and romps quite madly,
there’s never been a better day.
Gamboling down the hill,
a whirling dervish made of mud,
there’s never been a better day.
As rain keeps pouring down.
A whirling dervish made of mud.
It’s time to end our walk,
as rain keeps pouring down
my soles and hat are sogged.
It’s time to end our walk.
I whistle loud and firm.
My soles and hat are sogged,
but never has my heart
felt so lithe and light.
Suse Pareto writes and lives in western Petaluma, California with her dogs, cat and husband.
A pantoum is a poetic form derived from a Malaysian verse form in which the 2nd and 4th line of every verse becomes the 1st and 3rd line of the following verse creating interwoven quatrains.
Pantoum rules and pantoums on The Write Spot Blog:
Instead of New Year’s Resolutions, how about writing a character sketch, either about yourself, or about your fictional characters.
Finish the following sentences as your fictional character would, or for yourself, perhaps a new way of looking at old ideas.
“Character Sketch”
My full name is:
I live at or near:
I live with:
Today I want:
Today I hope:
I am happiest when:
I daydream about:
If I had my way:
I don’t understand:
What I could do is:
Sometimes I think:
If I were in charge:
I get angry when:
People wouldn’t like it if they knew:
If only we had enough:
A person can’t be happy unless:
I never told anyone that I:
Five years ago:
Five years from now:
“Character Sketch” by B. Lynn Goodwin, Writer Advice
The idea of using Lynn’s “Character Sketch” as inspiration for a new way of looking at old ideas is by Marlene Cullen.
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