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  • A Day in Rome

    Memorable writing that sparks imagination. Lean in. Hear the writer’s voice on the page.

    A Day in Rome

    By Rebecca Olivia Jones

    We arrive by taxi at our pensione in Rome. The taxi driver had been blowing his nose but he was helpful with the luggage.

    We check in at the front kiosk of what had been a convent. A couple of nuns assign us a room with two single beds. We are informed of a continental breakfast in the kitchen 6:00 am-8:00 am and the rules that include making your bed each day and leaving the building by 9:00. Be back before 10:00 pm when the front door is locked.

    The pensione is located up the street from the Forum, across the cobblestone street from an ancient church with a Gothic bell tower and near a tiny restaurante that makes fresh pasta.

    For two days we hike the hills and ruins of Rome and taste divine piatti and gelato.

    The third day, my nose, lungs, and throat blow up with a bad cold. We are flying back home to California the following day, so it is decided that I break the rules and stay in my tiny bed.

    My partner supplies me with rough tissues, medicinal tasting cough drops, and apple juice and leaves for his day of adventure.

    I lie with the large window open and aurally tour our little street of Rome. I hear all kinds of shoes clip and clop on the cobblestones.

    I listen to languages that seem to include Italian dialects, Australian English, French, German and Japanese, even dog bark.

    Around noon I sniff garlic and onions and tart tomato. I visualize the sizzle of sautéed delicate white pesce and tangy radicchio.

    I am too sick to long for a glass of vino rosso but a mug of soothing peppermint tea with honey would be nice.

    I am drowsy when the tonal power of a pipe organ resounds from the church across the street. It continues with the harmonies of a Bach prelude, then a delicate Vivaldi cantata and goes on to classic renditions of hymns, some familiar to me.

    I am lifted off my feverish mattress by the vibrations of the glorious music.

    I am ready to enter heaven.

    As the concert concludes, two nuns walk into my room, as surprised with my presence as I am of theirs. Through universal sign language, “no” and “si,” they ask if they can get me anything.

    I croak “grazie” and decline, embarrassed at being caught still “a casa.”

    They kindly leave me alone. (I am relieved my partner had made his bed.)

    Soon, he brings me a takeout bowl of salty minestrone and chewy panne rustica. He fills the room with excited energy, blows me a kiss and takes off for parts unknown. Finally, my belly and heart full, I drift off to sleep.

    A warm breeze dries my forehead. The sounds of wandering tourists fade.

    The memory of my divine private organ concert in Rome remains.

    Rebecca Olivia Jones is a playwright, singer, dancer, composer, choreographer, director, always a poet. In 2021, Rebecca collected her poetry and lyrics, accompanied by beautiful photography into a memoir, “Beachsight,” available on blurb.com.

    Rebecca has a B.A. in Creative Writing from New College of California. Also, a mother, grandmother, sister, and a seeker, she lives in San Rafael with her long-time boyfriend and their cat; teaching singing lessons via zoom; enjoying hiking, gardening, cooking, reading, and writing. She is an advocate for the Alzheimer’s Association.

  • Write to exorcize what’s haunting you.

    “Write to exorcize what’s haunting you. Write about whatever it is you can’t get out of your head—a person, a place, a fear, a fictional scene, a memory from your past, a fantasy for your future. Allow yourself to think obsessively and shamelessly about only that one thing for as long as it takes to get it down on paper.” —Puloma Ghosh, The Isolation Journals, created by Suleika Joauad.

    This type of writing is like unpeeling layers of emotions.

    Just Write.

    The Isolation Journals is Suleika Joauad’s newsletter for people seeking to transform life’s interruptions into creative grist.

    Both free and paid subscriptions are available.

    Memory Lane offers ideas to spark writing about what a memory from your past, or a fantasy for your future.

    #amwriting #justwrite #iamawriter

  • More Chicken Soup For The Soul

    Do you think submitting stories to Chicken Soup For The Soul books are for someone else, not for you? Do you think you have no chance of your writing being selected?

    Well, I know three people who have had their writing accepted.

    So, why not you?

    One of the key things is to follow their guidelines.

    Thank you, John Lesjack, for letting me know about the holiday topics (deadline 5/1/22).

    John has been published in Chicken Soup books over ten times.

    Nancy Julien Kopp has been published in Chicken Soup books over 20 times!

    Possible Chicken Soup Topics

    Angels (deadline 4/15/22)

    Crazy, eccentric, wacky lovable, fun families (4/30/22)

    Cats (deadline 5/30/22)

    Dogs (deadline 5/30/22)

    How stepping outside my comfort zone changed me (deadline 7/31/22)

    Chicken Soup Holiday Topics

    Are the memories from this past holiday season still fresh in your mind? We sure hope so! That’s why, just a few days into the new year, we are sending this request to you for holiday stories. And we mean the entire season — from Thanksgiving to Christmas to Hanukkah to Kwanzaa to Boxing Day to New Year’s. We want stories about every one of them.

    We want holiday stories that share your traditions and memories of normal times — pre-pandemic. We want your holiday stories that share how your traditions and celebrations changed because of the pandemic. Please remember to make sure your submissions are “Santa safe” so we don’t spoil the magic for our precocious readers!

    Here are some suggestions but don’t let these limit you. We know you can think of many more.

      • New holiday traditions started — and to be continued?
      • Thanksgiving — holiday fun, disasters, and family bonding
      • Hanukkah — all by itself or incorporated into your Christmas tradition
      • Kwanzaa — traditions and celebrations
      • Boxing Day — traditions and celebrations
      • The weeks leading up to Christmas — anticipation, energy, the kids
      • Using technology, Zoom or FaceTime gatherings instead of meeting in-person
      • Decorating — oh, how we love to do that!
      • Undecorating — oh, how we hate to do that!!
      • Shopping and finding the perfect gift
      • Shopping on-line only — hits and misses!
      • Staying home instead of traveling
      • Holiday humor — things that went wrong
      • Holidays through the eyes of the children
      • Around the table — eat, eat, eat and be merry
      • Family reunions
      • Unique gifts, creativity, the best gift you ever gave or received
      • Unique gifts, creativity — the worst gift you ever gave or received!
      • Regifting
      • Happy New Year!
      • Holiday miracles, amazing coincidences, answered prayers
      • Gratitude, counting your blessings
      • Seeing the silver linings
      • Forgiveness and how you used it during the holidays
      • Family dynamics — milestones, tender moments, epiphanies
      • What you learned during the holidays

    All stories and poems need to be true.

    No longer than 1,200 words.

    Written in first person.

  • What nourishes you? Prompt #636

    Prompt: What nourishes you?  Write for 15 minutes. Use sensory details:  sight, smell & sound.

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    Next: Picture the kitchen in the house you grew up in. See the table and chairs, the counter, the cupboards.

    Open a cupboard . . . or walk into the pantry. Take a look around. Open the spice cabinet. Breathe deeply.

    Prompt: What food reminds you of the kitchen in the house where you grew up in? Memories surrounding that food?

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    Prompt: Take a few words from previous two freewrites and expand, or describe, using smell and sound. For example, from “The Martian Chronicles by” Ray Bradbury:

    “There was a smell of Time in the air tonight . . . What did Time smell like? Like dust and clocks and people. And if you wondered what Time sounded like, it sounded like water running in a dark cave and voices crying and dirt dropping down upon hollow box lids, and rain. Time looked like snow dropping silently into a black room or it looked like a silent film in an ancient theatre one hundred billion faces falling like those New Year balloons down and down into nothing. That was how Time smelled and looked and sounded.”

    Use sensory detail: Smell

    What does rain on asphalt smell like?

    What does a crunchy red apple smell like? 

    Mentally walk through an apple or a pear orchard where the earth has recently been plowed. Describe that earthy smell.

    What does a redwood forest smell like, deep in the grove where it’s quiet?

    It might smell old or ancient and calm. What does old, ancient, and calm smell like?

    old . . . smells like parchment paper

    ancient . . . smells like musty book

    calm . . . smells like summer rain candle

    Use sensory detail: Sound

    What does old, ancient, calm sound like?

    old sounds like coughing and wheezing

    ancient sounds like rattling breath

    calm sounds like church . . .  sitting in an old Catholic church in the middle of the afternoon with no else there. That’s calm.
    The neurological impact of sensory detail

    Imagery and sensory detail ala Adair Lara Prompt #277

    33 Ideas You Can Use for Sensory Starts Prompt #278

  • Gratitude

    Memorable writing that sparks imagination. Lean in. Hear the writer’s voice on the page.

    Gratitude

    By Kathryn Petruccelli

    Spring in a cold place. Which means everything is so heartbreakingly tender—tulips lifting their dusky prom skirts, dandelions twinkling in their green sky.

    I’ve lived here a little while, this rural New England town, its six months of winter, a place accustomed to waiting for beauty to appear. I’ve left somewhere I loved to move far away in service to a restless heart, the bonus draw of family. In the time since, I’ve witnessed a father-in-law dissolve from brain cancer, a second-born survive the bypass machine, tiny heart sewn back together.

    Walking through the park with the baby, I call a friend back home to catch her up, or to remember who I am, or to plead with her to come visit and if she can’t, at least to understand. The wheels of the stroller make that delicious sound they make as they roll over gravel. Cherry blossoms are open, magnolias, their ancient blush. It’s good to hear her voice—magical, even—then, I falter.

    “What? What is it?” she wants to know.

    “No, nothing,” I say. “I mean, it’s not that bad here,” I try, watching the robins, chests plump as plums at the edge of the lake, side-eyed, cocking their heads askew to see the ground in front of them. 

    Kathryn Petruccelli is obsessed with place, language, and the ocean. Her work has appeared in the Southern Review, RattlePoet LoreTinderboxWest TrestlePlant-Human Quarterly, and elsewhere. She teaches online writing workshops from western Massachusetts, from which she also gardens and pines for California’s central coast. More at poetroar.com.

    Published in River Teeth, 2/21/2022

    River Teeth is a biannual journal combining the best of creative nonfiction, including narrative reportage, essays and memoir, with critical essays that examine the emerging genre and that explore the impact of nonfiction narrative on the lives of its writers, subjects, and readers.

  • Memory Lane . . . Prompt #635

    Today’s Writing Prompt has four parts.

    Part 1

    Imagine you are going on a trip. Cost is no object. You can go anywhere and take anything you want.

    Spend a few minutes writing what you would take.

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    Part 2

    Mentally add safety items to your suitcase, or duffle bag, or backpack. You might have already packed some of these things.

    Medical supplies, bandages, antiseptic.

    Flares, flashlight.

    Things to protect you: sunscreen, a soft pillow for a cushioned landing in case you fall, a safety net to catch you.

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    Part 3

    Go on a trip down Memory Lane.

    Choose a time in your life when something deeply affected you or was troubling.

    Write about a difficult time, a pivotal moment, when something happened and you were not the same after.

    If you experience a strong reaction while you are writing, stop writing. Shake out your hands, or look up, take some deep breaths. Look out a window.

    Remind your body that you are safe at this time.

    Write about a difficult time, a pivotal moment, when something happened and you were not the same after.

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    Part 4

    Travel back in time, again. This time, go to a lovely moment. A time of peace and calm. Who was with you? Or, were you alone?

    Describe the scene, like you would see it unfold in a play. What do you see? What do you smell? What do you hear? Use sensory detail as you write about this memory.

    Bring in smells if you can . . . clean laundry, sheets dried outside on a clothesline, a shirt being ironed, fresh lemons, strawberries. The smell of the ocean, diesel fuel. Freshly mowed lawn.

    Bring in sound: The iron hissing on the shirt, the bang of the screen door, the clang of a bell. Waves washing ashore. Bicycle tires crunching on gravel. The crunch of autumn leaves as you walk on them.

    Write about a special time that makes you smile every time you remember this moment, perhaps a time when you felt at peace.

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  • Writing is magical

    Photo by Robin Hewett Jeffers

    Writing is magical. Take some blank pages, write or type on them, and as if by magic, a story appears. It may be an incomplete story and it may feel fragmented, but it’s the beginning of Your story.

    Writing can be healing, especially when you write what you really want to say, rather than listing what you did that day, journal style.  The most magical writing is when you get so involved in your writing that you lose track of time, you lose track of where you are and even, who you are!

    The process of writing can be therapeutic. With this deep writing, you may experience a release of emotions, clearing the air, and seeing old things in a new way. — “The Write Spot to Jumpstart Your Writing: Connections.”

    Personal Essay as Therapy

    Just Write!

    #amwriting #justwrite #iamawriter

  • Gimme Shelter

    Memorable writing that sparks imagination. Lean in. Hear the writer’s voice on the page.

    Gimme Shelter

    By William Frank Hulse III 

    When we’re watching a movie from the comfort of our recliners, relaxed and mellow, my bride will become frustrated when the hero does something physically impossible.

    For me it’s the magic of movies. I don’t believe it for a second, but the scenes are fun and allow me to freestyle through the adventure.

    Since I almost always immerse myself in a character, I want to enjoy moments of charmed innocence, believing everything I see and hear and feel.

     It has a gauzy sheer that stays in place, even when the curtains go up. It helps give the events an element of reality that only lasts until the closing credits roll. When Nancy gets uptight about the science friction, I remind her, “Suspend your disbelief.”

    I enjoy being drawn into the story. It is surely escapist, in the best sense of the word. It distracts me from the realities that loom on the horizon or are present and accounted for, clamoring for my attention – begging me to worry or fret. Not fair!

    I cannot solve all of the world’s problems; I can barely keep my own from bubbling over and scalding me with their persistent demands on my attention. And, I’m healthy! What a terrible price life inflicts if I can’t escape its anxieties for a time. But I can do better than escape. I can withdraw from the fray and enjoy sanctuary.

    It’s not like the escapist and vicarious enjoyment of some wild movie or book. It’s that still, quiet haven where I can preen – clear out the dust and grime and parasites and align my feathers so that I can fly again – better yet, soar again.

    There is a completely blue sky this morning. Try as I may, I can’t find that shade of blue in my box of crayons but when I close my eyes, it is shining brightly in my mind’s eye.

    And that sun, oh, that sun, is shining even brighter.

    I will soar again and warm my soul – but I’ll remember not to fly too close to the sun. My crayons might melt.

    I wonder what color would emerge from 48 crayons. That will keep me guessing and smiling at that wonderment. It’s not something I see into my immediate future, but I do plan to get a jar of bubbles and watch that tiny miracle unfold and then make tiny pops to end their flight.

    There now, isn’t that better. A moment of examination and another of reflection to set the stage and allow me to wend my way on this soul’s passage, right here and right now. Namaste…

    William Frank Hulse III is a native Oklahoman, born and raised in the Indian Cowboy Oilman community of Pawhuska. He began his college career at Central State College in Edmond but enlisted in the U.S. Army in 1968. While serving in the military Frank completed his undergraduate degree with the University of Maryland. Upon his return to civilian life in 1975, Frank was employed by Phillips Petroleum Company for almost 30 years. Since retiring he plays guitar and writes.

    Note From Marlene: You are welcome to comment on this story on my Writers Forum Facebook Page.

  • The Ekphrastic Review

    The Ekphrastic Review

    “We only publish literature inspired by or responding to visual art in some way. Our definition is flexible, but we are a niche journal and an ekphrastic writing archive and do not consider or publish non-ekphrastic work. Submissions that are not connected in some way to visual art will be deleted without response.” 

    Ekphrastic Mission

    The Ekphrastic Review is committed to the growth, expansion, and practice of the art form of creative writing inspired or prompted by visual art. 

    We define ekphrastic writing simply as “creative writing inspired by art.” The piece can be an in-depth experience of the art work, or it can use the art as a starting point for expression. The connection to the artwork or artist can be subtle, or it can be central to the work.

    Best Chances of Publication

    1. Ekphrastic translations. We are hungry for ekphrastic work from all over the world, in its original language, and translated into English.

    2. Stellar flash fiction, microfiction, small fictions: fiction from 50 to 1000 words.

    We have naturally evolved as a poetry-centric publication.

    We love poetry and always will, but we do receive a constant deluge of poetry, much of it stellar.

    We want to grow with great fiction. We like beautiful fiction that reads like poetry. We like interesting fiction. We like fiction that packs an emotional punch. We like fiction with language that stabs you in the heart, that you want to tape onto your fridge. We like fiction that shows us something new about art.

    Since we receive only a small fraction of fiction as we do poetry, and want to publish more, your story might stand a greater chance. Send your best!

    3. Ekphrastic Writing Challenges. Our biweekly prompt series is your best chance overall, as they are ongoing throughout the year. We have received as few entries as 10 and as many as 300, but we do publish multiple responses for each painting in one post, which gives you higher odds.

    Submission Guidelines

    Thanks to Guy Biederman for recommending The Ekphrastic Review. His piece, “Together Alone”, was accepted by The Ekphrastic Review

    #amwriting #justwrite #iamawriter

  • Sad about missing . . . Prompt #634

    I am most sad about having missed (in recent months, weeks, days) is . . .

    I’m looking forward to . . .

    For that to happen, this will have to happen . . .

    I believe . . .

    #amwriting #justwrite #iamawriter