Suicide Doors . . . Prompt #200

Today’s writing prompt is a poem by Ron Salisbury. You can write on the theme of the poem or the mood. You can use a line or a word for the writing prompt. Ready? Read and write. Just write, without  worrying how your writing will sound.

Suicide Doors

Don’t put that in a poem, she said.

What? Don’t put what I said in a poem.

We talk and a week later I find what I said

in one of your poems. What’s the matter

with that? He’ll find out. He doesn’t read

poems. His friends will tell him. His friends

don’t read poems. Just don’t put me in your poems.

How about I make it in the 1960’s

and it happens in my 1951 Merc with suicide

doors, I got a D.A. haircut, smell of Bay Rum

and your angora sweater comes off on my sport coat.

Then what happens. Well, we could be in love.

We already are. I mean the crazy 60’s love

before birth control pills and we both smoke

and sneak bourbon from your father’s liquor cabinet

and try to figure out how to get some Trojans

because they’re not in every grocery store

and you have to ask the druggist for them

because they’re kept behind the counter

like cigarettes are now and because

he knows everyone in town, it’ll get around

so we drive all the way to Dexter on Saturday

night and I’ll try to be cool and see if

I can buy some and if I can’t we’ll take

our chances anyways. Do we do it in the

back seat? Yeah, the Merc had a giant

back seat. And you won’t use any thing

I said in the poem. Sure. Ok, but

bring a blanket and you have to go slow

and give me time to hang my sweater

over the seat so it won’t get ruined.

Ron SalisburyRon Salisbury, author of Miss Desert Inn, (Main Street Rag Publications) lives in San Diego, CA, where he continues to publish, write and study in San Diego State University’s Master of Fine Arts program, Creative writing. Publications and awards include: Eclipse, The Cape Reader, Serving House Journal, Alaska Quarterly Review, Spitball, Soundings East, The Briar Cliff Review, Hiram Poetry Review, A Year in Ink, etc; Semi Finalist for the Anthony Hecht Poetry Prize – 2012, Finalist for the ABZ First Book Contest – 2014, First Runner-up for the Brittingham and Pollak Prize in Poetry – 2014, Winner of Main Street Rag’s 2015 Poetry Prize.

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