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  • Just when the caterpillar thought her life was over . . . Prompt #270

    Monarch butterfly Just when the caterpillar thought her life was over, she began to fly.

    If you have been following the prompts on The Write Spot Blog, you know what to do.

    If you are new to freewriting: set your timer for 15-20 minutes and just start writing. Write whatever comes up for you. Shush your inner critic, invite your internal editor to sit outside the room. This is your time to write freely and openly. Just as the caterpillar’s cocoon morphs into a butterfly, let your writing become whatever it wants to be. Just write.

  • I’m sorry you are experiencing this.

    Flashlight beam blueThis Write Spot Blog Post is inspired by The Writings of Tim Lawrence, The Adversity Within, Shining Light on Dark Places.

    Tim offers ideas in his blog post about helping someone who is grieving:

    “I acknowledge your pain. I am here with you.”

    “Grief is brutally painful. Grief does not only occur when someone dies. When relationships fall apart, you grieve. When opportunities are shattered, you grieve. When dreams die, you grieve. When illnesses wreck you, you grieve.

    So I’m going to repeat a few words I’ve uttered countless times:

    Some things in life cannot be fixed. They can only be carried. 

    These words come from my dear friend Megan Devine, one of the only writers in the field of loss and trauma I endorse. These words are so poignant because they aim right at the pathetic platitudes our culture has come to embody on an increasingly hopeless level. Losing a child cannot be fixed. Being diagnosed with a debilitating illness cannot be fixed. Facing the betrayal of your closest confidante cannot be fixed.

    They can only be carried.”

    —Excerpt from Tim Lawrence, 10/19/15 blog post, “Everything Doesn’t Happen For A Reason.”

    Note from Marlene: Some people think everything happens for a reason and this is a comforting thought for them. Others do not think everything happens for a reason. Grief can be difficult no matter what your beliefs are about why it happens.

    Suggestion from Marlene:  When someone is having a difficult time, instead of saying “Everything will be okay,” or “This, too, shall pass,” how about:

    “I’m sorry you are experiencing this.

    If you are experiencing grief that you can’t shake, please seek professional help.

    It might help to write about your situation. Please be careful not to re-traumatize while writing. For ideas on The Write Spot Blog about healing through writing, click on How to write without adding trauma  and Pema Chodron’s Things falling apart is a kind of testing.

  • Enter Writer Advice Contest And Receive Feedback.

    If you want your writing to be published, you have to submit.

    If you want to be a better writer, you need feedback.

    You can get both when submitting to Writer Advice contests.

    B. Lynn GoodwinB. Lynn Goodwin, founder of Writer Advice, reads every manuscript submitted. She will give you excellent feedback, tell you what’s working and identify anything that trips her up.

    I first met Lynn in a writing workshop in Berkeley, CA, summer of 2007. I admired her writing then and admire her editing skills now.

    Lynn’s tips on how to win a contest:

    Entice. Grab attention. Make the reader want to know more. Give reasons for the reader to care.

    Due by September 1: Scintillating Starts:  Middle Grade, Young Adult, or New Adult novels. 1000 words or less. Fee: $15. First prize: $160. Second prize. $50.

    Due by December 1: Scintillating Starts: Fiction, memoir, or creative non-fiction. 1000 words or less. Fee: $15. First prize: $160. Second prize. $50.

    Click on Contest Guidelines for complete rules for submitting to Writer Advice contests.

  • Does your heart hurt? Prompt #269

    Broken heartDoes your heart hurt?

    I’ve been hearing “My heart hurts” from  several friends these past few days. And when I hear their stories, my heart hurts, also.

    What to do?

    I believe in healing through writing. So, let’s write.

    Write about: Does your heart hurt?   Write all the details you can about this.

    What happened?  Write all the details that you know. If you were directly involved: Be as detailed and as explicit as you can.

    When did it happen?  Day of week? Time of day? Where did it happen? Who was involved?

    What were you wearing? Were you standing or sitting?

    If you weren’t directly involved: Write as many details as you know. Then, focus on why you are affected. What connects you to what happened? Why are you affected so strongly?

    Read the next part after you have written about why your heart hurts and how and why you are affected.

    Okay, I know, if you are like me, you will read the whole thing now and write later. That’s fine. Go ahead and read the next part.

    Louise De Salvo, Writing As A Way of Healing, says by writing our stories fully, we can begin to understand what was formerly unclear.   By writing, we can understand what we didn’t previously understand. What we’re writing is called a narrative.

    In order to come away with this as a learning experience and with a good feeling, we need to make this writing a healing narrative.

    A healing narrative is a balanced narrative.

    This type of narrative uses negative words to describe emotions and feelings …. Probably what we just did in our writing about a hurting heart. A healing narrative also uses positive words.

    Take a minute now to rethink your experience that you just wrote about and see if you can find something positive and hopeful about your encounter.

    Even if your event was traumatic and extremely unpleasant, is there anything positive you can add to your narrative?

    Write: Take a few minutes to write about something good — anything — that came from that experience.

    For example, after writing about my difficult situation, I realized I was right to pay attention to my intuition.

    How are you feeling now? Take a few minutes to jot down what you are feeling now.

    Go ahead. Write down your feelings. Even if you didn’t write on the prompt. . . take a few minutes to jot down your feelings. Later, when you write on the prompt, compare your feelings then with now.

    You can use writing to shift your perspective. Sometimes you can’t change the situation that’s causing you pain. You can change how you look at it.

    The key is to write about events and the emotions surrounding those events.

    James Pennebaker describes this in his book, Opening Up.  Healing starts when you write about what happened and how you felt about it then, and how you feel about it now.

    And in order for our writing to be a healing experience, we need to honor our pain, loss and grief.

    As we write, we can become observers. It is not what you write, or what you produce that is important. It is what happens to you while you are writing that is important.

    So, that’s why we write . . . to understand ourselves, our emotions and our world.

    Please, if you are feeling completely overwhelmed, seek professional help.

    For more details on how to write about difficult topics: please click on How to write without adding trauma.

  • What about “They?” Arlene Miller answers.

    Arlene MillerGuest Blogger Arlene Miller, The Grammar Diva, gives us a sneak preview into her recently published second edition of The Best Little Grammar Book Ever!

    If you are a member of the nerdy world of grammarians, you know that there are “controversial” grammar topics. One of those is the use of the Oxford comma. Another is the use of the singular they.

    I use the Oxford comma, and I don’t use the singular they. But both these issues are up to you. Let’s talk about the singular they.

    They is a pronoun. A pronoun is a word that stands in for a noun. We know that they is third person plural. Third person singular pronouns are he, she, and it.

     Now how many times have you said, or heard someone say, Everyone is bringing their book to the meeting or something similar? Let’s pick that sentence apart:

    This is an issue of agreement: a singular subject has a singular verb form to go with it. And a singular noun or pronoun will have a singular pronoun of the same gender stand in for it. Everyone sounds plural, but it is singular. You can tell because you use a singular verb with it; you wouldn’t say Everyone are bringingBut you would say They are bringing because they is plural. Okay, so we have a singular subject (everyone) and a matching singular verb (is bringing), but what about their book? Their is plural. It doesn’t agree.

    Now if we said Everyone on the girls basketball team has her uniform, we would all be happy.

    But if everyone refers to a mixture of male and female, or if we simply don’t know, what do we do? Well, we used to just say his or her and be done with it. Actually, before that, we probably used to just say his and be done with it — but that is not politically correct and will not do any longer.

    What to do . . . what to do . . .

    Well, most everyone just uses their. It is easier to use one word than that clunky old his or her. The English language, so far, doesn’t have a word that can stand in for either a singular male or female.

    The sentence Everyone is bringing their book to the meeting is now acceptable and considered correct. Most people use it and have been using it, without knowing or caring, forever. But many people, especially when making a speech, do use he or she, or his or her

     Many grammarians and language purists are horrified by the use — and even more, the acceptance — of the singular they.

    My advice is to rewrite your sentence to avoid the issue entirely. It is usually really easy to do: Everyone is bringing a book to the meeting.

    Problem solved . . .

    Six years ago, I published my first book, The Best Little Grammar Book Ever!. Since then, I have written five more grammar books and a novel. Now, a second edition of that first book, with a new format, a new subtitle, and new information has been published. New information, you might ask?  Does grammar change? Yes, slowly, but things do change, although there are always those (me, among them) who would rather stick to the “rules”!

    Arlene Miller, The Grammar Diva, is also a blogger, copyeditor, speaker, and former English teacher.  She is a member of Redwood Writers and Bay Area Independent Publishers Association, where she has been a featured speaker.

    Book Launch for the Second Edition of The Best Little Grammar Book Ever! Speak and Write with Confidence/Avoid Common Mistakes  will be in the form of a Grammar Workshop at Petaluma Copperfield’s Books on Saturday, August 6 at 1 p.m.

  • Unplug . . . a moment for yourself. Prompt #268

    “We often rate our days by what we’ve accomplished, applauding ourselves for a workout logged, an errand completed, a task crossed off. But consider grading today on a new curve. Give yourself credit not for doing but simply for being—for taking time to sit alone, listening, daydreaming, creating space to think. Only then can you connect with the most important person in your world: yourself. “— author unknown

    Imagine you have all the time in the world. There isn’t anything you have to do. Whatever needs to be done in your real world is magically done for you. In this dream world, you have no worries and no cares.  You are able to unplug and relax into the softness and enjoy the moments of bliss.

    As you enjoy this time of freedom, you connect with the most important person in your world: yourself.

    Unplug

    Writing prompt:  If you could unplug, what would you do?  How would you spend your time?

     

    When you are finished . . . Take a few minutes to ponder . . .

    What’s stopping you from doing these things?

  • EatingWell Welcomes Freelancers

    EatingWell magazine is looking for articles about cooking, nutrition science, and the origins of food and social issues related to food networks, and welcomes ideas from new writers.

    “EatingWell’s voice is journalistic and authoritative; it speaks to both men and women. We cover nutrition with a newsy, science-based approach.”

    Before submitting, become familiar with EatingWell magazine and departments. “It’s difficult for us to contract with someone to write a story—no matter how brilliant the idea is—if it doesn’t fit into a specific department in the magazine. Send us ideas for specific sections in the magazine.”

    “You increase your chance of scoring an assignment with us if you 1) develop your pitch following the format for past columns, and 2) explain why the proposed topic should be covered in a specific issue.”  Go to EatingWell Submission Guidelines for examples and pitching tips.

    EatingWell welcome freelancers.
    “In this front-of-book section, we feature seasonal picks and the latest trends in food and health (think: food policy, sustainable agriculture, wacky healthy new eating practices, etc.). While some of the Fresh section’s regular elements are written in-house or by regular contributors, much of the section is open to freelancers. Items generally range from 150 to 350 words. This is a section in which we like to try out new writers. Writers interested in contributing to the Fresh section should have a strong background in science, health and/or food reporting.

    FRESH Food: These pages are dedicated to celebrating food. Could be a restaurant, a farm find, a seasonal food, a great farmers’ market or something trendy in the food/drink market. Sustainable agriculture and food origins pieces could fit into this section.

    We’ll occasionally run something like “Local Hero in the News,” highlighting an individual (or group) who has a timely or newsy event or movement that promotes values of sustainable agriculture, food justice, nutrition education, food safety, environmental consciousness, animal welfare (as it relates to food) and/or healthful eating practices in his or her (or their) local community. Tell us about the results: What has this person/group accomplished? Who have they helped? What makes them unique?

    FRESH Life: Here we will be getting more into how food and eating intersect with lifestyle, such as travel, beauty, books (not diet or cookbooks) and gifts.

    FRESH Thinking: This page covers several facets of one current food-related issue, controversy or movement.”

    Note from Marlene: If writing for EatingWell interests you, do go to their website for more ideas of what they are looking for, plus contact information.

    EatingWell

  • You have survived. Prompt #267

    Pink LadiesThe pink ladies are about to bloom in Northern California where I live. Their proper name is Amaryllis belladonna.

    “A plant gone wild and therefore become
    rugged, indestructible, indomitable, in short: tough, resilient,
    like anyone or thing has to be in order to survive.”   —  The Ubiquitous Day Lily of July by David Budbill

     

    This last sentence in The Ubiquitous Day Lily of July reminds me of our pink ladies and is the inspiration for today’s writing prompt.

    Write about something you have survived.

  • Ingram Spark? Bookbaby? CreateSpace?

    Shirin BridgesGuest Blogger Shirin Bridges sheds light on Ingram Spark, BookBaby, and CreateSpace.

    The following is an excerpt from Shirin Bridges’ June 24, 2016 blog post on Goose Tracks.

    I was recently asked for the pros and cons of Ingram Spark vs. BookBaby. The answer, I quickly realized, is a complex one, greatly dependent on the particular publishing goals for the book. I also thought that in any decision tree, Amazon’s CreateSpace would have to rate a mention. So what follows is my attempt to delineate the decision tree I would adopt in choosing between these three services . . .

    [Note from Marlene: For the full post, please go to Shirin’s informative blog, Goose Tracks].

    1. How important are bookstores to your sales strategy?
      If NOT VERY, skip to 4.
      If VERY, keep reading.

    Self-published authors will find it almost impossible to get wide distribution in bookstores. Period. The reasons are legion but boil down to two words: workload and risk. Most self-published authors aren’t represented by distributors that bookstores are already doing business with, and there’s little incentive to slog through the paperwork to set up a new account or to take your books on consignment and handle you outside the system.

    . . .  bookstores might be a valid cornerstone of some self-publishers’ sales strategies. A good example would be if you have a book with a very specific market that can be reached through very specific bookstores. Take Katy Pye‘s Tracking the Flash: My Lighthouse Travel Log. Where would you sell that? Gift shops attached to lighthouses, or bookstores in the neighboring towns. If you’re a buyer in one of those stores . . .  You’d probably at least take a peek at something so specifically lighthouse-y.

    You may also decide for emotional reasons that getting into bookstores is important to you. It’s perfectly valid to feel that if you’re going to go to all this trouble to write, fund, and publish a book, you’re going to enjoy a book launch party and the pride of having your book on a shelf in your local bookstore(s). Depending on your relationship(s) with your local bookstore(s), this might be a real possibility and may even lead to a reasonable number of sales. Amanda Conran, for example, was guaranteed a launch party at Book Passage in Corte Madera, for the excellent reason that she works there. She sold around 120 copies of The Lost Celt on her big day. That’s about half the total sales of most self-published titles . . .

    . . . if you decide that bookstore sales are important to you, then drop CreateSpace right off the bat. Most independent bookstores will not knowingly take a CreateSpace book. They hate Amazon that much, and Amazon doesn’t help out by playing ball either: CreateSpace offers roughly half the discount (read profit margin) that bookstores are used to getting from other distributors and publishers.

    Ingram, on the other hand, already has a relationship with just about every bookstore in the USA and an established (and accepted) discount schedule. Within the industry, Lightning Source, Ingram’s original print-on-demand offering, was thought to provide much better production quality than CreateSpace—better color handling, more trim sizes, fewer typographic anomalies, etc. Spark has probably inherited some of this perception as a halo effect, even though its production process is different. (Lightning Source accepts printer-ready PDFs, forcing someone to pay attention to typography—or so one would hope; Spark, like CreateSpace, uses a “meat grinder”—an automatic formatting system that, in CreateSpace’s past, at least, was prone to errors.)

    The Amazon stigma, if you’re targeting bookstores, is a compelling argument for favoring Ingram Spark. But how do you choose between Spark and BookBaby?

    1. Do you want someone to produce your book for you?
      If you want help, keep reading.
      If you think you can do it yourself, skip to 3.

    As Ingram wholesales for other book producers, you can benefit from Ingram’s bookstore relationships without producing your book with Ingram. BookBaby is a popular option.

    When authors gush about their experiences with BookBaby, and quite a few of them do, it’s usually because BookBaby makes everything so easy. You pay them; they take care of it. Then, once your books are produced and in all the promised sales channels, they are out of the picture. No ongoing royalties, etc. It’s a straight “for fee” service.

    They are credited with an excellent support staff who actually answer the phone. They provide easy, one-shop access to professional book designers and editors. (BARNT BARNT, that’s my alarm system blaring: for a professional-quality book, you need both of these services!) If I wasn’t a publisher myself and didn’t have easy access to designers and editors, etc., I’d probably consider using BookBaby.

    1. Do you think you can produce a book yourself?
      On the other hand, some self-publishers don’t need BookBaby’s menu of services. Some are already working with editors. I’ve been retained by a few of them, and these clients are a determined bunch who want to be more than authors—they want control of the entire publication process. (I actually brought one an invitation to submit from a traditional publisher, and he turned it down because he wanted to retain all creative control.) They want to pick their own illustrators and/or designers and have control of the cover art. They relish the challenge of marketing. They are digitally adept enough to deal with the meat grinders without suffering dangerous spikes in blood pressure. If you have your stable of professionals in hand and don’t need much additional production help, Ingram Spark is the most direct route into the Ingram database. As Ingram is America’s largest book wholesaler, that’s the catalog most independent bookstores will use when placing an order.

    Be very clear that Ingram Spark, BookBaby, and nearly all similar services offer production, fulfillment, and easy ordering of your books, but although they use the word “distribution,” they are not full-service distributors. Industry distributors like Perseus and Independent Publishers Group have sales forces. In theory at least, their sales reps will go out there and plug your book. (In reality, their sales forces have thousands of books they can plug; they will plug what they think they can sell.)

    Ingram and BookBaby, et al., do not offer sales services. They do not sell to the trade. YOU have to do the work to get a bookstore to place an order. Although you will be in the Ingram database, that database during any given season includes thousands upon thousands of titles, so unless the bookstore is actively looking for it, your book will not be found.

    1. Are you primarily interested in online sales?
      . . .  If your intent is to go online-only, the choice comes down to Amazon vs. someone like BookBaby.

    BookBaby’s advantages were covered in #2 and they apply whether or not you’re interested in bookstores . . .  BookBaby will take care of production of the print-on-demand (POS) book and conversion of the e-book, and usher both into the appropriate retail channels, dominated by Amazon for POS, and Kindle for e-books. They’ll charge you a fee for their services, and then you will take all profits minus the cut to your retailers.

    Amazon is a little trickier in that not only do you have to handle print book production yourself, you have to handle ebook production also. Even if you are not intimidated by this, there will still be two separate Amazon companies with their own procedures that you’ll have to deal with: CreateSpace for the POS book; and Kindle for the e-book. If you would like your e-book available for every device, you will also have to convert your book into multiple e-book formats and distribute them separately to non-Kindle platforms like iBooks and Kobo.

    One plus of persevering and tackling CreateSpace and Kindle yourself is that you can take advantage of Kindle’s Select program. This gives you higher royalties and various marketing perks in exchange for a period of exclusivity—at a minimum, 90 days. Another advantage is that your POS books are directly in the Amazon system. You don’t have to ship books to them; they print them right off their own printers. But one of the most compelling reasons to consider the CreateSpace + Kindle bundle is profit. By not paying the likes of BookBaby, you can invest less in the production of your book. (Although, repeat repeat: I would really urge you to pay for a book designer for the cover, a professional editor, and ideally a separate copyeditor—so any apparent savings may be a false economy.) CreateSpace is also thought to generally offer lower per-book prices than Ingram Spark, although costs vary with page count and format. When you get into the publishing business, you will be bowled over by how thin the margins are, so any penny saved is a penny earned.

    OK, at this point I’m not sure if I’ve bored or depressed you into a stupor or confused you with all the branches of my decision tree, so I’m going to close with one last question:

    1. Do you really have to choose between them?
      Going back to the original question of whom I would choose, BookBaby or Ingram Spark, and having introduced Amazon as a third candidate myself, here is what I would try if I were a self-publisher with a commercial fiction novel. If, say, I had a romance, or a piece of sci-fi, or a mystery—all genres that do well digitally—and I were a first-time publisher with few professional contacts, I would:

    Go to BookBaby and have them help with design and editing, because, as I hope I’ve made abundantly clear, both are necessary to give your work its best shot, and unless you are from an affiliated field, you might not know what good design and editing is. BookBaby not only gives you access to those services, but their suppliers have been vetted, and from what I can see, BookBaby knows a thing or two about professionalism and design, so “better than nought” as they say in northern England (pronouncing the “nought” as “nowt”).

    Have them distribute your POS book, including to Amazon and Ingram. You will get the world’s largest online retailer, and the world’s largest bricks-and-mortar wholesaler as sales channels—recognizing that the responsibility for sales (pushing consumers to those channels) falls 100% on you.

    Order 100 (more if you’re really brave) print copies and sell them hard to friends and family. Take sample copies into all the independent bookstores within a 50-mile radius (my personal definition of “local”) and try to negotiate consignment deals. Do the math carefully here because you should expect to give away a commission of at least 40%. That may leave you with little profit.

    At the very least, negotiate a book launch party with the best independent bookstore within that radius. I work very, very hard at bringing my own crowd, knowing that I will get exactly three members of the public who happened to wander in.

    Have lots of photos taken signing books. This is your author’s moment, and most self-published authors will look back and realize they spent a few thousand dollars on it, so suck as much joy out of this marrow as you can.

    In the meantime, happy writing!

    Note from Marlene: Please go to Shirin Bridges’s blog, Goose Tracks, for the rest of her amazing and thorough report on this topic.

  • Something you will never forget . . . Prompt #266

    Today’s prompt is inspired by Hal Zina Bennett, Write From The Heart

    Pink lemonadeFor some people, summer means sipping cool drinks. For others, summer might mean sitting around a campfire after a day of hiking, swimming, exploring. Summer might mean telling stories —tall tales or short ones— while lounging on a porch, a patio or a boat deck. There is a rhythm to summer, unlike any other time of year.

    Summer ’round the campfire brings out story tellers. The shaman storyteller of ancient times, embraces his own life experience, tells stories to the community that gathers in a circle around him, a fire blazing at its center. In the telling of what most deeply touched his life, the shaman helps others to see that they are not alone. And in the process both storyteller and listeners are healed.

    Imagine now, that you are sitting ’round a campfire, very comfortable with the folks you are sitting with. It’s story telling time. Each person tells a story about a time that was so meaningful, it is something they’ll never forget.

    Prompt: Write about something you will never forget.   Remember: first thoughts are where the energy is. If you can, start writing where your first thoughts take you. If that becomes difficult, write about another time, another story. And when you are finished writing, please take a few minutes to do some clearing (described below).

    Right after writing: Take a deep breath in. Hold for a moment. Let it out. Shake out your hands. Another deep breath in. Let it out.

    Again: A deep cleansing breathe in. Hold and release.

    If you wrote about something that leaves you feeling wonderful, keep it. Hold it close to your chest.

    If you wrote about something that leaves you feeling uncomfortable . . .  release it. Gather your thoughts and your words. Send them up in the campfire smoke. Send those thoughts up with the smoke.

    We’re going to replace the space that those thoughts occupied with an image that comforts you.

    Choose an image that is comforting to you. Any image you like, as long as it soothes. Give it a color.

    Fill the space in your heart with this image and the color.

    Take a deep breath in. Hold for a moment. Let it out. Stretch. Another deep breath in. Hold and release. Congratulate yourself. Even if you didn’t write, you may have thought about what you could have written. Maybe, when you have time, you will write on this topic: Something you will never forget.